Bringing Good to a Bad Situation (Please read)

Published: Tue, 08/07/12

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I already e-mailed you once today, so I'll cut right to the chase ...

You'll see a rare pitch in this e-mail -- but not for the reason you might think.

You see, I recently learned of a tragic accident that's affected just about everyone in the small Michigan town I grew up in. The matter is personal to me because the crash claimed the mother of my good friend's children.

These are young kids I see every year when we're on vacation, including just last month. I can't stop thinking about the situation they're now in.

So I'm determined to bring a little joy back to their lives, which is the reason for this e-mail.

The following offer involves a collection of heavily discounted products and services guaranteed to boost responses on your marketing. Although this outcome is great for you, it's even better for my friend's kids because I'm giving them all the proceeds from this sale.

So here's the deal ...

The economic crisis is feasting on people's finances. As a result, business owners and entrepreneurs keep putting more pressure on their marketing to perform. The problem, though, is most marketing fails.

That's why the first item in my offer is a Guaranteed Copy Critique. I'll review any single piece of copy -- advertisement, e-mail, postcard, brochure, web page or similar promotional material -- and give you specific recommendations on how to modify it for increased responses.

I'll fix your mistakes fast and turn a failing piece into a lead-capturing tool you can use over and over again. (This service is especially helpful for fixing underperforming print ads.)

Now, if you make my suggested changes and your piece doesn't generate more leads that it did before, I'll refund your full investment.

Fair enough? That way there's no risk for you to try my suggestions.

In addition, I'll include access to two of my training programs: The Quick-Start Guide to Writing Powerful Marketing Materials and The Anatomy of a Profitable E-mail Campaign: How to Quickly Write Irresistible Marketing Messages. Together, this is nearly five hours of instructional material (with transcripts) that you can go through at your own pace.

I'll also mail you a copy of my new book, The "You" Effect: How to Transform Ego-Based Marketing Into Captivating Messages That Create Customers. If you already have the book, I'll mail it to anyone you want on your behalf.

Your investment for the Guaranteed Copy Critique and these three training tools is just $97 (the critique alone is normally $145). But you only have until the end of the day on Friday, Aug. 10, to take advantage of this offer.

Request your critique and training tools here: Discounted Marketing Resources

As soon as I receive your payment, I'll e-mail you all the electronic files for the trainings. You can then reply back with the copy you'd like me to fix. Also, if you want me to mail The "You" Effect to someone else, send me the name and address.

Keep in mind, you don't have to use your Guaranteed Copy Critique immediately -- you can save it for a later date. Again, my guarantee makes your $97 investment risk-free. If the critique doesn't help you get more leads, I'll give you your money back and you can keep the three other marketing resources.

I'm excited to make these tools available to you at such a discounted price and, at the same time, help a couple of kids during a desperate time of need.
 
Get your training tools and critique today: Discounted Marketing Resources

Thank you!

Sincerely,
Tom Trush

P.S. Remember, this offer only lasts through Friday, Aug. 10. On Saturday, I'll write a check and mail it back to Michigan. Here's the order link: Discounted Marketing Resources